We are learning to:
. give our reader a clearer picture by including adjectives in our recounts
. correctly place full stops and capital letters
· In my writing I will have included one or two adjectives
. In my writing I will have started a sentence with a capital letter and finished it with a full stop
Lillian you have included several adjectives in your recount. You are beginning to use full stops and capital letters correctly. Great writing.
To add more information to the ending of your writing. For example "I loved it because....."
To continue to work on the correct placement of capital letters and full stops.